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Live now is better than it was hundred to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own

Live now is better than it was hundred with this statement give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own YmAQm
Life is a very valuable gift that is given by god. Some people say that life is better now than it was 100 ago. However, I could agree with this and owing to numerous reasons that would be discussed in the upcoming paragraph. To begin with, it is certainly true that there has been a huge change, place in our way of living with the time. Firstly, with the development of industry and they are many changes introduced in the modern world like motor vehicles were made, new agriculture tools were built. For example, a century ago there was used bullock cart for journey and Agriculture but now they have a lot of motor vehicle like car, motorcycle, airplane, train Electra. tractor for agriculture. Moreover increasing technology in today's society has proved the way of multifunctional devices like smartphones, smartwatches, and computers Furthermore, in India, some changes come in the cast system or traditional and ritual activity. For an explanation in hundred ago roles of individuals according to the cast which one they were born like Brahman was right to worship and schooler, Kshatriya caste has been warriors and Kings, vaishya has been merchants and shudra caste have been members or to serve all upper cast but now condition change. About from that with the development of westernization the food habits of individuals also change compare to the old society. To summarise, the development of industrialization and westernization lot of change to come in modern individual society as a century ago society.
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valuable gift
that is
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given
by god.
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Some
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people
say that life is better
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now
than it was 100 ago.
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, I could
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agree
with this and owing to numerous reasons that would
be discussed
in the upcoming paragraph.

To
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begin
with, it is
certainly
true that there has been a huge
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change
, place in our way of living with the time.
Firstly
, with the development of
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industry and
they are
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many
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changes
introduced in the modern world like motor vehicles
were made
, new agriculture tools
were built
.
For example
, a century ago there was
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used
bullock cart for journey and Agriculture
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but
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now
they have
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a lot of
motor vehicle like car, motorcycle, airplane, train Electra.
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tractor
for agriculture.
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Moreover
increasing technology in
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today
's society has proved the way of multifunctional devices like smartphones, smartwatches, and
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computers


Furthermore
, in India,
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some
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changes
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come
in the
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system or traditional and ritual activity. For an explanation in
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hundred
ago roles of individuals according to the
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cast
which one they
were born
like Brahman was right to worship and schooler, Kshatriya
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caste
has been warriors and Kings,
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vaishya
has been merchants and
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shudra
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caste
have been members or to serve all upper
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cast
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but
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now
condition
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change
. About from that with the development of
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westernization
the food habits of individuals
also
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change
compare to the
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old
society.

To
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summarise
, the development of industrialization and
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westernization
lot of
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change
to
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come
in modern individual society as a century ago society.

IELTS essay Live now is better than it was hundred with this statement give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own

Essay
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4 paragraphs
252 words
5.0
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