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Life is better now than 100 years ago

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Life has changed so much in a century even in a decade. But now, is life better? Why? Firstly, the healthcare area has changed as a result of the creation of machines that make it easy as cameras for certain surgeries. For example, you can have the medical history in just a simple click of your tablet. Secondly, computer generated imagery has changed entertainment through making possible what was impossible a century ago. An example of this is the last Star Wars movie that was filmed after the death of Carrie Fisher. Finally, grandmas had to do their chores with their own hands when they were young. But now, you use a machine as a dishwasher to clean your dishes instead of doing it yourself. To sum up, our lives are better than a century ago as a consequence of the developments that technology has done. I truly believe that life is better now but we have to carry on developing things for future generations.
Life has
changed
so
much in a century even in a decade.
But
now
, is life better? Why?

Firstly
, the healthcare area has
changed
as a result
of the creation of machines that
make
it easy as cameras for certain surgeries.
For example
, you can have the medical history in
just
a simple click of your tablet.

Secondly
, computer generated imagery has
changed
entertainment through making possible what was impossible a century ago. An example of this is the last Star Wars movie that
was filmed
after the death of Carrie Fisher.

Finally
, grandmas had to do their chores with their
own
hands when they were young.

But
now
, you
use
a machine as a dishwasher to clean your dishes
instead
of doing it yourself.

To sum up, our
lives
are better than a century ago as a consequence of the developments that technology has done. I
truly
believe that life is better
now
but
we
have to
carry on developing things for future generations.
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IELTS essay Life is better now than 100 years ago

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
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