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Life is a festival to the wise. In addition to their artistic and cultural importance, festivals have a considerable economic value. Write an essay of four paragraphs describing your favourite festival that takes place in Kuwait.

Life is a festival to the wise. In addition to their artistic and cultural importance, festivals have a considerable economic value. Write an essay of four paragraphs describing your favourite festival that takes place in Kuwait. XGqnY
Hala February Festival is an annual festival that has been held in Kuwait every year since 1999 which has a variety of dazzling activities and bubbly events. This essay is discussing the artistic and cultural importance of the festival as well as the economic significance of it. Some experts suggest that Hala February Festival has a great cultural and artistic importance. As cultural activities are encouraged in many areas such as poetry, musical concerts and art galleries. For example, the spectacular Hala February musical concerts which are performed by the most famous artists from all over the Arab world. In addition to the traditional shows that celebrate the Kuwaiti customs in clothes, foods and traditional songs which are held at schools, malls and even in TV shows. During such celebrations everybody is dressed in traditional Kuwaiti clothes especially with the colors of the Kuwaiti flag to revive their heritage. All in all, this festival has contributed in enriching and reviving the cultural and artistic life in Kuwait. One, however, should not forget that Hala February has also an extremely significant economic value. During the festival, there are many events that dramatically boost the economical life in Kuwait. For example the huge concerts, the incredible raffles on gold bars and cars and the famous shopping festivals encourage everyone living in Kuwait to spend their money there. It also attracts multitude numbers of tourists from neighboring countries to come and enjoy these entertainments and shopping carnivals. Indeed, Hala February has a great influence on the economic life in Kuwait. In conclusion, festivals are times when people gather to celebrate the joy of life together. Hala February festival in Kuwait has a great cultural as well as economic significance, which makes it one of the most prominent festivals in the gulf region.
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February
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Festival
is an annual
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festival
that has
been held
in Kuwait every year since 1999 which has a variety of dazzling activities and bubbly
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events
. This essay is discussing the artistic and
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cultural
importance of the
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festival
as well
as the
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economic
significance of it.

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Some
experts suggest that
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Hala
February
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Festival
has a great
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cultural
and artistic importance. As
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cultural
activities
are encouraged
in
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many
areas such as poetry, musical concerts and art galleries.
For example
, the spectacular
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Hala
February musical concerts which
are performed
by the most
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famous
artists from all over the Arab world.
In addition
to the traditional
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shows
that celebrate the Kuwaiti customs in clothes, foods and traditional songs which
are held
at schools, malls and even in TV
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shows
. During such celebrations everybody
is dressed
in traditional Kuwaiti clothes
especially
with the colors of the Kuwaiti flag to revive their heritage. All in all, this
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festival
has contributed in enriching and reviving the
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cultural
and artistic
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life
in Kuwait.

One,
however
, should not forget that
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Hala
February has
also
an
extremely
significant
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economic
value. During the
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festival
, there are
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many
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events
that
dramatically
boost the
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economical
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life
in Kuwait.
For example
the huge concerts, the incredible raffles on gold bars and cars and the
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famous
shopping
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festivals
encourage everyone living in Kuwait to spend their money there. It
also
attracts multitude numbers of tourists from neighboring countries to
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come
and enjoy these entertainments and shopping carnivals.
Indeed
,
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Hala
February has a great influence on the
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economic
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life
in Kuwait.

In conclusion
,
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festivals
are times when
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people
gather to celebrate the joy of
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life
together.
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Hala
February
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festival
in Kuwait has a great
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cultural
as well
as
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economic
significance, which
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makes
it one of the most prominent
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festivals
in the gulf region.
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IELTS essay Life is a festival to the wise. In addition to their artistic and cultural importance, festivals have a considerable economic value. Write an essay of four paragraphs describing your favourite festival that takes place in Kuwait.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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