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Life in Foreign countries....

Life in Foreign countries.... GN6KQ
nowadays many people travel to foreign counties for pleasure. some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Travellling is a leiure activity pursued by the rich people of the society, who have higher disposable income. In this regard, although travelling abroad have lots of positive affect on the human being, a handful people pounder that migrate in outside territory has a prejudice influence to. I partially agree to the writer's notion, and the reason for my inclination are articulated in ensuing paraghaphs. First and foremost reason to support my ideology is that there are people shifting to foreign nations for healthy lifestyle. While travelling in other territory not always adverse impact on the countries, settling in abroad enormous benefits such as job oppurtunities, luxuries lifestyle, and good education system. In addition, going to abroad is an immense job opportunities because they are lots of industrial areas and job wage is the highest in america, canada, australia, and new zealand comparied to india. To site an example, last year governmaent survey people who just completed graduation 50 precent of applying for higher educational in abroad. As a result, if people migrate abroad, it would impact the nations. Nonetheless, inspite of its positves, it has its own ramifications. Firstly, settling in foreigh nations have to long distance from home a few devasting impact such as homesickness, differ culture and tradition. A part from that living in foreigh countries have higher expensive cost and also food issue becuase outside nations have almost all retailer selling non-vegaterian food, so few a people selling vegaterian food and that's why food cost higher. For instance, when my best friend gone to canada, they told me that there are living expensive and food issue highly notable. Agglomerating all the points elaborated above it can be concluded that migrate in other nations have deterioarating impact on the countires; however, settling in abroad has an enormous positive influence to the individual person. In my opinion, I believe that sifting to countries it would immense benefits such as freedom to live, job employment, and lexuries life.
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nowadays
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many
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travel to foreign counties for pleasure.
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some
believe this travel has a
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negative
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impact
on the
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countries
travelled to. To what extent do you
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agree
or disagree?

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is a
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leiure
activity pursued by the rich
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people
of the society, who have higher disposable income. In this regard, although travelling
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abroad
have lots of
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positive
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affect
on the human being, a handful
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people
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pounder
that migrate in outside territory has a prejudice influence to. I
partially
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agree
to the writer's notion, and the reason for my inclination
are articulated
in ensuing
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paraghaphs
.

First
and foremost reason to support my ideology is that there are
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people
shifting to foreign
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nations
for healthy lifestyle. While travelling in other territory not always adverse
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impact
on the
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countries
, settling in
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abroad
enormous benefits such as
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job
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oppurtunities
, luxuries lifestyle, and
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good
education system.
In addition
, going to
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abroad
is an immense
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job
opportunities
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because
they are lots of industrial areas and
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job
wage is the highest in
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america
,
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canada
,
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australia
, and
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new zealand
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comparied
to
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india
. To site an example, last year
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governmaent
survey
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people
who
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just
completed graduation 50
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precent
of applying for higher educational in
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abroad
.
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, if
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migrate
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abroad
, it would
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impact
the nations.

Nonetheless,
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inspite
of its
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positves
, it has its
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own
ramifications.
Firstly
, settling in
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foreigh
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nations
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have to
long distance from home a few
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devasting
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impact
such as homesickness, differ culture and tradition. A part from that living in
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foreigh
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countries
have higher expensive cost and
also
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food
issue
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becuase
outside
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nations
have almost all retailer selling
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non-vegaterian
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food
,
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few a
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people
selling
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vegaterian
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food
and that's why
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cost higher.
For instance
, when my best friend gone to
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canada
, they
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told
me that there are living expensive and
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food
issue
highly
notable.

Agglomerating all the points elaborated above it can
be concluded
that migrate in other
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nations
have
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deterioarating
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impact
on the
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countires
;
however
, settling in
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abroad
has an enormous
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positive
influence to the individual person. In my opinion, I believe that sifting to
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countries
it
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would immense
benefits such as freedom to
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live
,
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job
employment, and
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lexuries
life.
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IELTS essay Life in Foreign countries....

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
359 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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