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Learning foreign language creates job opportunities

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There is no doubt, learning a foreign language creates job opportunities. And also we should admit it, especially, English is becoming increasingly popular among youngs nowadays. What is more, there are a large amount of demands. Moreover, parents are bringing their sons to the foreign language courses. It is the best option. In may essay, I prove my opinion with examples. On the one hand, It seems too difficult to study and sometimes it requires a lot of time for somebody. Oppositely, admirers will be perfect quickly. In other words, which easy work do you see? Of course, in any work we should attempt to achieve to our purpose. On the other hand, there are a lot of convinenience of foreign languages. Firstly, If you travel around the world, you do not face difficulties, you can speak with local people easily. As a result, you do not a guide. Secondly, you can find well-paid job. Furthermore, when you fancy reading book which are written in foreign language, with this aim you are aware of tradition of another nation. In my conclusion knowing many languages is trendy now. Even though it has difficulties, you never surrender. If you have interests and clear goal, nothing will be fence for you. It is never late. Do not forget it, never stop learning, because life never stops teaching you.
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language
creates job opportunities. And
also
we should admit it,
especially
, English is becoming
increasingly
popular among
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nowadays.
What is more
, there are a large
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amount
of demands.
Moreover
, parents are bringing their sons to the
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foreign
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language
courses. It is the best option. In may essay, I prove my opinion with examples. On the one hand, It seems too difficult to study and
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sometimes
it requires
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a lot of
time for somebody.
Oppositely
, admirers will be perfect
quickly
.
In other words
, which easy work do you
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see
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Of course
, in any work we should attempt to achieve to our purpose.
On the other hand
, there are
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a lot of
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convinenience
of
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languages
.
Firstly
, If you travel around the world, you do not face difficulties, you can speak with local
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people
easily
.
As a result
, you do not a guide.
Secondly
, you can find well-paid job.
Furthermore
, when you fancy reading book which
are written
in
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foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, with this aim you are aware of tradition of another nation. In my conclusion knowing
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many
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languages
is trendy
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now
.
Even though
it has difficulties, you never surrender. If you have interests and
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clear
goal, nothing will be
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for you. It is never late. Do not forget it, never
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stop
learning,
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because
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IELTS essay Learning foreign language creates job opportunities

Essay
  American English
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