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Last weekend, after a long hard-working week. I felt really depressed and stressed. I had numerous things need to achieve last week but I just had a limited time.

Last weekend, after a long hard-working week. I felt really depressed and stressed. I had numerous things need to achieve last week but I just had a limited time. Bw1Xp
Last weekend, after a long hard-working week. I felt really depressed and stressed. I had numerous things need to achieve last week but I just had a limited time. As normally, I called my father to share with him what I experienced after a week. My father said that it's normal problem I need to encounter at work. at first, I felt too angry because he didn't stand by my side. After that, my father gave me piece advice that it was a chance for me to learn time management, and if I work hard and overcome the challenge, I can improve myself. This challenge was a lesson for me to be down to earth to chase after my dream. It had really cheered me up and gave me full of energy for the coming week.
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. I had numerous things need to achieve last
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had a limited time. As
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, I called my father to share with him what I experienced after a
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. My father said that
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, I felt too angry
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he didn't stand by my side. After that, my father gave me piece advice that it was a chance for me to learn time management, and if I work
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and overcome the challenge, I can
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myself. This challenge was a lesson for me to be down to earth to chase after my dream. It had
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IELTS essay Last weekend, after a long hard-working week. I felt really depressed and stressed. I had numerous things need to achieve last week but I just had a limited time.

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