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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What could be done to buy local products

Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What could be done to buy local products DBDa
Nowadays, big corporations have spent a large amount of their financial statement on marketing and campaigns drawing lots of the public's eyes. Following this strategy, people are inclined to buy their products while the local merchandises have found it difficult to sell their products and get a foothold in the competition on the market. It is therefore worth examining the possible effects of this phenomenon and suggesting measures that should be taken to address the issue. Imbalance in product consumption between large businesses and local companies has posed real challenges. A central issue is that just only be attracted to the fame of the products, people have high condition to buy bad or unqualified products. With the mediaplay, regardless of the quality of products is good enough or not, big corporations just want to build reputation and increase the amount of product consumption. Admittedly, if you want to have a foothold in the market, you have to swing with quality, but using too many advertising will cause people to have a false view of the quality of the products. In addition, because of too much marketing large businesses, the local brand cannot afford to promote products to consumers because of limited capital. As a result, high-quality products don't have ability to produce to everybody. Serious attempt must be made to remedy the situation. Primaily, government urge to the masses that they should have some policy which help local businesses find the right ways to bring the products closers to buyers. Moreover, the authorities should encourage people to use more handmade and a domestic things created by some small companies to increase the economy in many fields of nation's products. If steps were taken to aware people about the truth of advertisements and the products, consumers will put some parts of their fauth in the local's products. In conclusion, although large companies spend their large part of money on advertising their products, the consumers must ensure their need before purchasing them and the local businesses should build up more breakthrough step to popularise their products to the masses.
Nowadays,
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big
corporations have spent a
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large
amount of their financial statement on marketing and campaigns drawing lots of the public's eyes. Following this strategy,
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people
are inclined
to
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buy
their
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products
while the
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local
merchandises have found it difficult to sell their
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products
and
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get
a foothold in the competition on the market. It is
therefore
worth examining the possible effects of this phenomenon and suggesting measures that should
be taken
to address the issue.

Imbalance in
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product
consumption between
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large
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businesses
and
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local
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companies
has posed real challenges. A central issue is that
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just
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only
be attracted
to the fame of the
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products
,
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people
have high condition to
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buy
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bad
or unqualified
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products
. With the
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mediaplay
, regardless of the quality of
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products
is
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good
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enough
or not,
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big
corporations
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just
want to build reputation and increase the amount of
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product
consumption.
Admittedly
, if you want to have a foothold in the market, you
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have to
swing with quality,
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but
using too
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many
advertising will cause
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people
to have a false view of the quality of the
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products
.
In addition
,
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because
of too much marketing
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large
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businesses
, the
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local
brand cannot afford to promote
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products
to consumers
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because
of limited capital.
As a result
, high-quality
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products
don't have ability to produce to everybody.

Serious attempt
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must
be made
to remedy the situation.
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Primaily
,
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government
urge to the masses that they should have
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some
policy which
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help
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local
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businesses
find the right ways to bring the
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products
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closers
to buyers.
Moreover
, the authorities should encourage
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people
to
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use
more handmade and a domestic
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things
created by
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some
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small
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companies
to increase the economy in
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many
fields of nation's
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products
. If steps
were taken
to aware
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people
about the truth of advertisements and the
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products
, consumers will put
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some
parts of their
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fauth
in the local's products.

In conclusion
, although
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large
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companies
spend their
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large
part of money on advertising their
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products
, the consumers
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must
ensure their need
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before
purchasing them and the
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local
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businesses
should build up more breakthrough step to
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popularise
their
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products
to the masses.
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IELTS essay Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What could be done to buy local products

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