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Laptop and it's different uses

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Can anyone live without using a Laptop? In the past, people lives simple life no technology at all no TV, Compute and the internet. nowadays everything has been changed. I can see our life is dependent on the internet, everything we can find it on it our study, work, search and even, in our communications. There is a video call consequently, you can keep on touch with your friends even they were at a very far place from you. Although, there are disadvanteges for it especially for kids who sitting on the Laptop for longe time without supervision In my opinion everythings in the life have a double sward edges
Can anyone
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live
without using a Laptop? In the past,
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people
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lives
simple life no technology at all no TV, Compute and the internet.
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nowadays
everything has been
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changed
. I can
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see
our life is dependent on the internet, everything we can find it on it our study, work, search and even, in our communications. There is a video call
consequently
, you can
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keep
on touch with your friends even they were at a
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very
far place from you. Although, there are
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disadvanteges
for it
especially
for kids who sitting on the Laptop for
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time without supervision In my opinion
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everythings
in the life have a double sward edges
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IELTS essay Laptop and it's different uses

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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