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lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance

Issues show us that there is a global problem of fresh water stress. Pure water being used more and more in the last two centuries due to increasing the majority of industrial companies and fabrics, also it depends to climate change. Water shortage is the main problem in African and Asian countries, according to this some people donate a lot of money to help them. Nowadays people make informed decisions to save water, for example famous brands have option as clothes recycling. In addition you also have an opportunity to buy clothes, bags and shoes made from recycled materials. Scientists could develop effective ways for producing fresh water and waste-water treatment. Because lack of fresh water could lead to war between countries, various form of diseases and natural disasters.

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show
 us that there is a global problem of fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
. Pure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 more and more in the last two centuries due to increasing the majority of industrial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 and fabrics, also
 it The verb ‘to depend’ requires the preposition ‘(up)on’: “depends on”.depends on
depends
 to climate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
Water
 shortage is the main problem in African and Asian countries, according to this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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people
 donate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them. Nowadays This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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make
 informed decisions to save You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, for example
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famous
 brands have option as clothes recycling. In The comma is probably missing here: “addition, you”.addition, you
addition you
also
 have an opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 clothes, bags and shoes made from recycled materials. Scientists could develop effective ways for producing fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and waste-water treatment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 lack of fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 could lead to war between countries, various form of diseases and natural disasters. 