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.June 05, 2020 Task 2 question for home task. Send it tomorrow by 16.00 Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this

. June 05, 2020 Task 2 question for home task. Send it tomorrow by 16. 00 Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this 0pMEQ

Nowadays most of the elderly prefer sedentary life than getting more exercises. There appear to be main problem of this and possible solution which can be implemented to tackle, which will be analyzed in this essay. The main reason can be that older people are afraid of obtaining injury while doing exercises. As a result, they think that if the body sustains are injury, recovery could take months or years because of weak body and bones. For example, the older people heard about that the others twisted during activities or evening walk and took 3 months in order to walk and at this time such kind of events can appear fear to the elderly. To solve this problem, the family members can play a vital role through supporting and reducing their fear of injury. Therefore, at the beginning the older people should be taught light form of exercises such as Yoga instead of doing tough activities. For instance at home they do light household works such as watering plants, controlling the garden, walking the yard In conclusion, lack of strength cause this problem and the solution will be require combined action by advise of doctors and supportive family.

Nowadays most of the elderly prefer sedentary life than getting more exercises. There appear to be main problem of this and possible solution which can be implemented
 to tackle, which will be analyzed
 in this essay.

The main reason can be that older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are afraid of obtaining injury while doing exercises. As a result
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that if the body sustains are injury, recovery could take months or years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of weak body and bones. For example
, the older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 heard about that the others twisted during activities or evening walk and took 3 months in order to walk and at this time such kind of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 can appear fear to the elderly.

To solve this problem, the family members can play a vital role through supporting and reducing their fear of injury. Therefore
, at the beginning the older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 should be taught
 light form of exercises such as Yoga instead
 of doing tough activities. For instance
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yard


In conclusion
, lack of strength cause this problem and the solution will be Consider using the past participle "required"?required
require
 combined action by advise of doctors and supportive family. 