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These days, people in many countries have to face certain circumstances

These days, people in many countries have to face certain circumstances 9a3Bx
These days, people in many countries have to face certain circumstances, which might cause them stress. If we are asked to make a definite answer about how to get over those situations, it might be difficult to decide. Due to the fact that human has their own way to get through the problems, whether it is about work, money or family, to name a few. Some of them might prefer accepting that, some might want to solve the problems right away. Both sides will be clarified in the following paragraphs. First and foremost, talking about people in the middle ages, nowadays, they are working with many competitors, who are trying to be promoted and to be the best in a field. Thus, everyone has to due with frustration and work-related stress. Otherwise, they will stay at the same level with low-paid income, which might cause a money shortage in the future. In fact, people who have a family, they have to manage their household expense annually, their anxiety level will be higher. When people learn how to live with those problems, I personally think that it is acceptable to embrace bad situations and accept that, in order to give themselves some times to consider about it. For the second solution, trying to improve is more likely the next action, which comes after thinking about the problem. I wholeheartedly agree that everyone should try to achieve what they want to pursue as much as they are capable of doing it. Since a big goal always takes time and lots of afford to succeed. It is totally fine if they learn from their mistakes and make sure that they can do it better next time. Moreover, these days, on the internet they can search for new opportunities, whether for educational purposes such as improving some particular skills or languages, also they can look for a job and even interview online. Many people in my country, have been running their own business at home since the beginning of covid-19. They could use cooking, knitting or even planting skills and add some creativity to start the business and make a profit. Last but not least, I think we are surrounded by many opportunities if we are willing to accept it, we will be able to overcome everything. Trying to be the best is not the answer, people should make mistakes since they will have a chance to solve them.
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. If we
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a
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definite
answer about how to
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get
over those situations, it
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be difficult to decide. Due to the fact that human has their
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own
way to
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get
through the
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problems
, whether it is about work, money or family, to name a few.
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Some
of them
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might
prefer accepting that,
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some
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might
want to solve the
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problems
right away. Both sides will
be clarified
in the following paragraphs.

First
and foremost, talking about
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people
in the
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middle ages
, nowadays, they are working with
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many
competitors, who are trying to
be promoted
and to be the best in a field.
Thus
, everyone has
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to due
with frustration and work-related
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stress
.
Otherwise
, they will stay at the same level with low-paid income, which
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might
cause a money shortage in the future. In fact,
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people
who have a family, they
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have to
manage their household expense
annually
, their anxiety level will be higher. When
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people
learn how to
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live
with those
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problems
, I
personally
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think
that it is acceptable to embrace
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bad
situations and accept that, in order to give themselves
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some
times to
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consider about it
.

For the second solution, trying to
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improve
is more likely the
next
action, which
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comes
after thinking about the
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problem
. I
wholeheartedly
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agree
that everyone should try to achieve what they want to pursue as much as they are capable of doing it. Since a
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big
goal always takes time and lots of afford to succeed. It is
totally
fine if they learn from their mistakes and
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make
sure that they can do it better
next
time.
Moreover
, these days, on the internet they can search for new opportunities, whether for educational purposes such as improving
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some
particular
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skills
or languages,
also
they can look for a job and even interview online.
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Many
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people
in my country, have been running their
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own
business at home since the beginning of
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covid-19
. They could
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use
cooking, knitting or even planting
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skills
and
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add
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some
creativity to
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start
the business and
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make
a profit.

Last
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but
not least, I
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think
we
are surrounded
by
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many
opportunities if we are willing to accept it, we will be able to overcome everything. Trying to be the best is not the answer,
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people
should
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make
mistakes since they will have a chance to solve them.
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IELTS essay These days, people in many countries have to face certain circumstances

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
405 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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