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It's always said that city life is perfect. Let describe about their drawback

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It is generally agreed today that city life is amazing, but there still have drawbacks. To begin with, modern life also means people are ignoring the things around them and stare at their smartphones. Most of them become insensitivity. Besides, people have to come up against traffic jams every day. Everyone is press for time. Furthermore, you have to pay through the nose for your cost of living, all fees are higher than one in a rural area. In conclusion, pollution in the city is always a hot problem. In the city, it has a lot of kinds of pollution, but the biggest pollution is air pollution and noise pollution. There is so much smoke: smoke from transportation, smoke from enterprise, . . . Noise pollution from horn, vehicle in a rush, …To draw the conclusion, one can say that living in a city has both benefits and drawbacks.

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