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It's about profile description for a website that must include mode of teaching, methodology, teaching style and results. It must not include any contact details.

It's about profile description for a website that must include mode of teaching, methodology, teaching style and results. It must not include any contact details. x7X9
The teaching style and methodology are entirely based on the requirement of the student. The results are surely expected to be good as per the feedback from the recent students. I have taught my not-so-bright younger brother from Grade 6-8 and he had shown a drastic increase in the marks. I try to be polite and friendly to the student to increase their understandability but some students do require a strict attitude which can be seen sometimes. You can ask me 100 times for any simple query and I will be happy to help each time. The mode of teaching will be online as of now and would like the student to concentrate on the subject and work on the given homework assignments as well. We can work on a chat session or have a video call session for the tutoring. I have been an online tutor in the field of science particularly in Chemistry for the last 2 years and 7 months. I have taught students overseas as well as within India. I want to help students to achieve great knowledge of the subject and will do anything required for the same.
The teaching style and methodology are
entirely
based on the requirement of the
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student
. The results are
surely
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expected
to be
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good
as per the feedback from the recent
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students
. I have taught my not-
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so
-bright younger brother from Grade
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6-8 and
he had shown a drastic increase in the marks.

I try to be polite and friendly to the
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student
to increase their understandability
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but
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some
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students
do require a strict attitude which can be
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seen
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sometimes
. You can ask me 100 times for any simple query and I will be happy to
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help
each time.

The mode of teaching will be online as of
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now
and would like the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
to concentrate on the subject and work on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
homework assignments
as well
. We can work on a chat session or have a video call session for the tutoring.

I have been an online tutor in the field of science
particularly
in Chemistry for the last 2 years and 7 months. I have taught
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
overseas
as well
as within India.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to
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help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to achieve great knowledge of the subject and will do anything required for the same.
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IELTS essay It's about profile description for a website that must include mode of teaching, methodology, teaching style and results. It must not include any contact details.

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5 paragraphs
193 words
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