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"It is said that we talk to people not the same way in person as we do on social networking sites." Do you think social networking sites have been changing us and our lives?

"It is said that we talk to people not the same way in person as we do on social networking sites. " Do you think social networking sites have been changing us and our lives? d9qR7

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