Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Intelligence is the most important key for a leader. To what extent do you agree?

Intelligence is the most important key for a leader. DoNrk

A superintendent is a person who leads & gets the job done with his team. To a certain extent I agree that being intelligent is the major quality for a leader. However, I also think that being honest & having a good communication skills are equally important. An acumenic leader must be able to convince the ordinary people and make people want to follow him. He should have the controlling power & manage any kind of situations whether it is challenging or difficult to handle. A real life example is Sheikh Hasina - the prime minister of Bangladesh- who makes ordinary people believe in her plans, also help her to implement various upcoming mega projects like metro rail, padma bridge etc. On the other hand, if the chief leader is honest as well as has good communication skill, it will definitely help his team to achieve any goals they want. For instance, I was on the verge of resigning from the job due to a problem with a co-worker, but when I frankly discussed it with my boss; the whole problem was resolved amicably. Thus, he made me feel unwind & this not only gave me job satisfaction but also helped me to be in good relationship with my co-worker later on. To conclude, this essay agrees that intelligence is definitely an important quality for a ruller, but honesty & good communication skills are important as well for the aforementioned reasons.

A superintendent is a person who leads & This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 the job done with his team. To a certain extent I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that being intelligent is the major quality for a leader. However
, I also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that being honest & having a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 are equally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
.

An Possible spelling mistake found.acumen
acumenic
 leader This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be able to convince the ordinary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 want to follow him. He should have the controlling power & manage any kind of situations whether it is challenging or difficult to handle. A real life example is Sheikh Possible spelling mistake found.HavingAsiaAsianBasinCasinoBasins
Hasina
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 the prime minister of Bangladesh- who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 ordinary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 believe in her plans, also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 her to implement various upcoming mega projects like metro rail, Possible spelling mistake found.pad maPalmaParma
padma
 bridge etc. On the other hand
, if the chief leader is honest as well
 as has You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
, it will definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 his team to achieve any goals they want. For instance
, I was on the verge of resigning from the job due to a problem with a co-worker, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when I frankly
 discussed it with my boss; the whole problem was resolved
amicably
. Thus
, he made me feel unwind & this not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 gave me job satisfaction This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me to be in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 relationship with my co-worker later on.

To conclude
, this essay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesces
agrees
 that intelligence is definitely an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 quality for a Possible spelling mistake found.rulerrollerFullerfullerMullerduller
ruller
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 honesty & You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
as well
 for the aforementioned reasons. 