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It is sad dialogue everything that is known including books compare and contrast knowledge gained from books

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It is truly believed that books plays a immense significant role in development of human beings. humans acquire knowledge from, family, schools freinds, experiences and so on. However, books and experience both are very important for individuals. Further both views are to analysed in the upcoming paragraph. On the on hand, There are many benefits of book for masses. First and foremost is, books helps to develop the brain of Adolscent since from childhood. To justify, books provide us huge amount of knowledge which will help in future in different fields. Also, tells us about our past history. Secondly, books teach us moral moral values how to do communication with individuals and make a good image in society. Moreover subject like mathematics can only be learnt with the help of books. A survey which was conducted by Europe University in 2015 revealed that it is scientifically proud that without education a man like a bird without wings. On the other hand, books are not the best source of knowledge actually we learn a lot more from our experience, To indeed a person who had read books about car driving can't become a good driver unless he gains a lot of experience by driving a car. Additionaly a person can not become a good swimmer while reading book because, practice is much essential for swimming rather than learning books. , Thirdly, no book can teach us how to deal with each and every situation without experience. To conclude, after having mulldover both aspects it is quite evident that both views have valid argument. but I personally believe that knowledge gained from books is more beneficial
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believed that
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a
immense significant role in development of human beings.
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humans
acquire
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knowledge
from, family, schools
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freinds
,
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experiences
and
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so
on.
However
,
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books
and
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experience
both are
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very
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important
for individuals.
Further
both views are to
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analysed
in the upcoming paragraph. On the on hand, There are
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many
benefits of
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book
for masses.
First
and foremost is,
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books
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helps
to develop the brain of
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Adolscent
since from childhood. To justify,
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books
provide us huge amount of
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knowledge
which will
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help
in future in
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different
fields.
Also
,
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tells
us about our past history.
Secondly
,
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books
teach us
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moral moral
values how to do communication with individuals and
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make
a
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good
image in society.
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Moreover
subject like mathematics can
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only
be
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learnt
with the
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help
of
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books
. A survey which
was conducted
by Europe University in 2015 revealed that it is
scientifically
proud that without education a
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man
like a bird without wings.
On the other hand
,
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books
are not the best source of
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knowledge
actually we learn a lot more from our
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experience
, To
indeed
a person who had read
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books
about car driving can't become a
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good
driver unless he gains
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a lot of
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experience
by driving a car.
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Additionaly
a person can not become a
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good
swimmer while reading
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book
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because
, practice is much essential for swimming
rather
than learning
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books
.
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,
Thirdly
, no
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book
can teach us how to deal with each and every situation without
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experience
.
To conclude
, after having
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mulldover
both aspects it is quite evident that both views have valid argument.
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but
I
personally
believe that
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knowledge
gained from
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books
is more
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beneficial
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IELTS essay It is sad dialogue everything that is known including books compare and contrast knowledge gained from books

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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