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It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A criticism is frequently heard these days the topic is taught that is more inclined to be significantly academic. therefore some parents have questined this issue, in my opinion i am agree with the shcools must be willing to prepare our children more academic than social sikils that education system should regulate in these days children i therefore i will illustreate why i lean on it more first of my reason is that this century children more active than previus generation, education systems are flouted with academic matters for this respect students do not tend to focus on a lesson process, so that leads to our children to be tired of listening the subject,
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heard these days the topic
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shcools
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more academic than social
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sikils
that education system should regulate in these days
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children
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therefore
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why
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lean on it more
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more active than
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generation, education systems
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children
to
be tired
of listening the subject,

IELTS essay It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills.

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114 words
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