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It is obvious that the rating of audio media has fallen remarkably in the recent time,leading to concern about the future of radio

It is obvious that the rating of audio media has fallen remarkably in the recent time, leading to concern about the future of radio LL1AG
It is obvious that the rating of audio media has fallen remarkably in the recent time, leading to concern about the future of radio. Due to the development of Internet media, I firmly believe radio will be removed some day. Audio media consumers get used to using mostly 1 sense to absorb the content. In the near future, Internet media not only has surplus availability of audio sources as a usual habit but also gives various ways of entertainment for users, which broaden more than 1 sense of individuals. For instance, a recent statistic by CNN has shown that 80% choose to use Internet media for listening to podcasts, reading news, watching weather forecasts-which doing multiple ways of medium. Therefore, the usage of radio will no longer lead the market. With the increasing number of Internet media consumers, radio companies also need to change their plan into a suitable platform. At Internet media, it is easy to catch up with trends-which are currently leading the social habit of consumers. By having that precious resources, companies can arrange their way for promotion and advertisement more specific. In contrast, with a small amount of radio users, companies find difficult to analyse the habit of consumers and stuck with finding ideas. As a result, radio will be something in our memory. In conclusion, I think audio can be a useless means of entertainment in the future for the tremendous development of the Internet medium.
It is obvious that the rating of audio
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media
has fallen
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in the recent time, leading to concern about the future of
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radio
. Due to the development of Internet
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media
, I
firmly
believe
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radio
will
be removed
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some
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Audio
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consumers
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get
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to using
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1 sense to absorb the content. In the near future, Internet
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media
not
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has surplus availability of audio sources as a usual habit
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, a recent statistic by CNN has shown that 80% choose to
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use
Internet
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media
for listening to podcasts, reading news, watching weather forecasts-which doing multiple ways of medium.
Therefore
, the usage of
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radio
will no longer lead the market.

With the increasing number of Internet
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media
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consumers
,
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radio
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companies
also
need to
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change
their plan into a suitable platform. At Internet
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media
, it is easy to catch up with trends-which are
currently
leading the social habit of
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consumers
. By having that precious resources,
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companies
can arrange their way for promotion and advertisement more specific.
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, with a
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small
amount of
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radio
users,
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companies
find difficult to
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analyse
the habit of
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consumers
and stuck with finding
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ideas
.
As a result
,
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radio
will be something in our memory.

In conclusion
, I
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think
audio can be a useless means of entertainment in the future for the tremendous development of the Internet medium.
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IELTS essay It is obvious that the rating of audio media has fallen remarkably in the recent time, leading to concern about the future of radio

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
241 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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