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It is observed that in many countries not enough student are choosing to study science subjects.

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The popularity of science related subjects has fallen dramatically globally, nowadays, ad a decreasing number of young people are opting to study them. The unprecedently low stature of scientists and science related careers in the societies seems to be the prime contributor of this to me. This fact may unavoidably slow down the pace of development in the society, in my opinion. The contribution of science and scientists seems to be underestimated everywhere in the world nowadays. In other words, they are paid for lower salaries for their jobs and for the most part struggle to make ends meets. Despite possessing much smaller levels of social contribution, sports people, lawyers and even actors are societies. This fact is serving as a discouraging message far most young people who are avoiding to study science, I think. The recent U. K. based survey by the Sociology part of the Manchester university can prove this point. The healthy part of teenagers in this survey worked the abovementioned as most prestigious professions and science isolated careers made it to the bottom of their list with lower than 10% of the adolescent participants. Such an unfortunate situation is highly likely to have a knock-on effect on the way these societies develop. Undeniebly, science serves as a milestone for the progress of many other fields and without it their developments is unimaginable. Scientific breakthroughs, discoveries and achievements alike, stimulate the fields like medicine, industry, education and other infinite number of spheres. Little interest of young people in science now can bring about a severe deficiency of scientists in the future, I believe. This, at its turn stops the improvements in the society affecting our lives. To conclude, societies underestimating the value of sciences in our lives and an unpromising future of science relaed careers are reducing the interest of young people in learning sciences. In my opinion, possible negative outcome of this could become the obscure or weekness of progress in our societies in years to come
The popularity of
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related subjects has fallen
dramatically
globally, nowadays, ad a decreasing number of
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young
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people
are opting to study them. The
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unprecedently
low stature of scientists and
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science
related careers in the
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societies
seems to be the prime contributor of this to me. This fact may
unavoidably
slow down the pace of development in the
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society
, in my opinion.

The contribution of
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science
and scientists seems to
be underestimated
everywhere in the world nowadays.
In other words
, they
are paid
for lower salaries for their jobs and
for the most part
struggle to
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make
ends meets. Despite possessing much smaller levels of social contribution, sports
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people
, lawyers and even actors are
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societies
. This fact is serving as a discouraging message far most
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young
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people
who are avoiding to study
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science
, I
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think
. The recent U. K. based survey by the Sociology part of the Manchester university can prove this point. The healthy part of
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teenagers
in this survey worked the
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abovementioned
as most prestigious professions and
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science
isolated careers made it to the bottom of their list with lower than 10% of the adolescent participants.

Such an unfortunate situation is
highly
likely to have a knock-on effect on the way these
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societies
develop.
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Undeniebly
,
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science
serves as a milestone for the progress of
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other fields and without it their developments is unimaginable. Scientific breakthroughs, discoveries and achievements alike, stimulate the fields like medicine, industry, education and other infinite number of spheres.
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interest of
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young
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in
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science
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can bring about a severe deficiency of scientists in the future, I believe. This, at its turn
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stops
the improvements in the
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society
affecting our
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lives
.

To conclude
,
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underestimating the value of
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sciences
in our
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lives
and an unpromising future of
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careers are reducing the interest of
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in learning
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sciences
. In my opinion, possible
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outcome of this could become the obscure or
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weekness
of progress in our
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in years to
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IELTS essay It is observed that in many countries not enough student are choosing to study science subjects.

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4 paragraphs
330 words
6.0
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