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It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a very common situation which don’t know how to children up. Many parents are faced various situation which never faced before. Because it’s first time to became a parents in their life. that’s why everyone can’t mutual in every circumstance. Recently there is an issue about adopted children in Korea. Some parent bullied their adopted child cause of money issue. If they were ever had parents educating, this consequence wouldn’t happened. *For this reason they need parenting training. That will improve their parenting life and children’s life. However, there is no correct answer how to children up. Every humans are different. We should consider their individual instead of being the same. How can prevent every situation which it happens yet. and treat situation all the same way. I would say we need absolutely parenting educating. But only minimal. Education always helps us however that can’t give correct answer all the time. More important things are focus on individual.

It is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 which don’t know how to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 up.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
are faced
 various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 which never faced This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
.

“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 it’s first
 time to The verb after “to” should be in the base form: “become”.become
became
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 in their life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.That
that
’s why everyone can’t mutual in every circumstance.

Recently there is an issue about adopted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 in Korea.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parent
 bullied their adopted child cause of money issue.

If they were ever had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 educating, this consequence wouldn’t The modal verb ‘would’ requires the verb’s base form.happen
happened
. *For this reason
 they need parenting training.

That will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 their parenting life and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children’s
 life.

However
, there is no correct answer how to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 up. ‘Each’, ‘every’, ‘either’ and ‘neither’ are used with singular. Did you mean “all”?All
Every
The noun should probably be in the singular form: “human”?human
humans
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
. We should consider their individual instead
 of being the same.

How can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 which it happens yet
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.And
and
 treat You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 all the same way.

I would say we need absolutely
 parenting educating. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 minimal.

Education always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 us however
 that can’t give correct answer all the time. More This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 things are focus on individual. 