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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extet do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children.

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extet with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children. VAVO
Nowadays, kids are becoming more and more rude towards the other people such as elders, their guardians, their mentors and many more. It is necessary for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at their initial years. Punishment is mandatory to help them to know this contradiction. I personally, completely agree with this claim. On the one hand it is crucial for kids to get aware about things such as which one is right and which one is wrong at early age. It might be difficult to teach this kind of lesson beacuse at that time they are not sufficient enough to understand the lesson in depth. For instance, parents are unable to fulfill their kids demands due financial issues in response children are become impolite towards rather than support them. In addition, some children also left the home or take some dangerous step such as suicide at very young age. If parents do not teach them this chapters of life then they have to be ready to faces concequences. So that, one can adapt good manners and behave polite to everyone in society. There are many ways to educate students such as scolding them, punish them by their teachers or parents. It would be legal to that, tutor may be punished their pupils by gave him more homework, take presentation about ideal students, by scolding them infront of their classmates, tell them to gave speech about life ethics of famous people, tell them to do drama on this topic. This will help students to teach some discipline and also develope a plethore of skill by perfomaing theatre on specific topic, by speaking in front of many students. Parents can also allow to gave them punishment like not giving pocket money, not arranging any kind of tours if their students behave unsual in any circumstances. This types of approches may help to upskill their level. In conclusion, i think children may eligible to absorb what is right or wrong because of at early age they have blank mind and it is ready to adapt nicely whatever we instruct them.
Nowadays, kids are becoming more and more rude towards the other
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people
such as elders, their guardians, their mentors and
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many
more. It is necessary for
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children
to learn what is right and what is
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wrong
at their initial years. Punishment is mandatory to
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help
them to know this contradiction. I
personally
, completely
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agree
with this claim.

On the one hand it is crucial for kids to
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get
aware about things such as which one is right and which one is
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wrong
at early age. It might be difficult to teach this kind of lesson
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beacuse
at that time they are not sufficient
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enough
to understand the lesson in depth.
For instance
,
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parents
are unable to fulfill their kids demands due financial issues in response
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children
are become
impolite towards
rather
than support them.
In addition
,
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some
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children
also
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left
the home or take
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some
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dangerous
step such as suicide at
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very
young age. If
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parents
do not teach them this chapters of life then they
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have to
be ready to
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faces
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concequences
.
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So
that, one can adapt
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good
manners and behave polite to everyone in society.

There are
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many
ways to educate
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students
such as scolding them, punish them by their teachers or
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parents
. It would be legal to that, tutor may
be punished
their pupils by gave him more homework, take presentation about ideal
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students
, by scolding them
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infront
of their classmates,
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tell
them to gave speech about life ethics of
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famous
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people
,
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tell
them to do drama on this topic. This will
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help
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students
to teach
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some
discipline and
also
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develope
a
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plethore
of
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skill
by
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perfomaing
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theatre
on specific topic, by speaking in front of
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many
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students
.
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Parents
can
also
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allow
to
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gave
them punishment like not giving pocket money, not arranging any kind of tours if their
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students
behave
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unsual
in any circumstances. This types of
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approches
may
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help
to upskill their level.

In conclusion
,
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i
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think
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children
may eligible to absorb what is right or
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wrong
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because
of at early age they have blank mind and it is ready to adapt
nicely
whatever we instruct them.
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IELTS essay It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extet with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children.

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