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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The claim people can be born with certain talents is worldwide argue. Once someone became to be famous, often the first question will be if it easy for them. For instance, people can know about certain persons they are talents because the easy way they are doing there profession. We do not know when the soccer player started play and for how long he practice during his free time. Even it it require less effort from him than other childen it does not say he will not doing anything for getting better. We know about their success but not what is happening before and after the game. Any child can be taught to become a expertise on his profession contract to other people the child will need practice and work harder. There are plenty of methods to raise the believe in children since they are young because other kids doing the same actions with much less effort. in conclusion. My option is any children has the potential but without long and tough exercises the child will not get his traget because the talent is wants to be better even his path to same place was easier for him.
The claim
people
can
be born
with certain talents is worldwide argue.

Once someone became to be
famous
,
often
the
first
question will be if
it
easy for them.
For instance
,
people
can know about certain persons they are talents
because
the easy way they are doing
there
profession. We do not know when the soccer player
started
play and for how long he
practice
during his free time.

Even
it it
require
less effort from him than other
childen
it does not say he will not
doing
anything for getting better. We know about their success
but
not what is happening
before
and after the game.

Any child can
be taught
to become
a
expertise on his profession contract to other
people
the child will need practice and work harder. There are
plenty
of methods to raise the
believe
in children since they are young
because
other kids doing the same actions with much less effort.

in
conclusion. My option is any children has the potential
but
without long and tough exercises the child will not
get
his
traget
because
the talent is wants to be better even his path to same place was easier for him.
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IELTS essay It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

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