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Due to the influence of worldwide media such as tv and computers the gap between culture is narrowing . The introduction of this 'global culture" is of great benefit to the world. To what extend do you agree with this viewpoint?

Some people believe that social media has reduced the distance between world wide culture which has been known as "global culture". I, however disagree with this given statement on the basis of unbalanced prospective of international media and financial aim of media tycoons. To begin, the media tend to concentrate on just some particular groups of people, so the public doesn't get a balanced perspective. As an example, news broadcasts often represent the view point of its owner rather than an objective opinion. Global culture not only don't provide the whole attitude of various people, but also bold exact groups of people. Moreover, media capitalist 's main attention is just to make money and undoubtedly marketing gimmicks are much more easier than making a product of lasting value. At the same time businessmen are more absorbed in markets rather than morals and virtues so will not engross in controvesrsial stories of being afraid of offending the local government. Ton conclude, i personally take the view that it is ethically unacceptable to interpret the narrowing culture gab will be created based on the appearance of social media.
Some
people
believe that social
media
has
reduced
the distance between
world wide
culture
which has
been known
as
"
global culture
"
. I,
however
disagree with this
given
statement on the basis of unbalanced prospective of international
media
and financial aim of
media
tycoons. To
begin
, the
media
tend to concentrate on
just
some
particular groups of
people
,
so
the public doesn't
get
a balanced perspective. As an example, news broadcasts
often
represent the view point of its owner
rather
than an objective opinion. Global
culture
not
only
don't provide the whole attitude of various
people
,
but
also
bold exact groups of
people
.
Moreover
,
media
capitalist 's main attention is
just
to
make
money and
undoubtedly
marketing gimmicks are much
more easier
than making a product of lasting value. At the same time businessmen are more absorbed in markets
rather
than morals and virtues
so
will not engross in
controvesrsial
stories of being afraid of offending the local
government
. Ton conclude,
i
personally
take the view that it is
ethically
unacceptable to interpret the narrowing
culture
gab will
be created
based on the appearance of social
media
.
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IELTS essay Due to the influence of worldwide media such as tv and computers the gap between culture is narrowing. The introduction of this 'global culture" is of great benefit to the world.

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