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It is contended that only good news should be broadcast on TV by media. While I agree because it is valuable for society I also believe other news related to crime, rape,robbery also telecast on news by this people aware time to time. In this essay I will examine my prospective in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, there are numerous points behind this statement internal and main point is that it is valuable for society if media reports the good news such as new development in the country. In other words, if government or any private firm promote any new facilities in the city by hearing good news people well aware about new development in the city and get offered from that sites. Moreover, good news always give reputation in the front of the world by the progress of new the thing for example, in japan when metro is launched every nation give the contract to Japan about the settlement in their city which assists to boost the economy. On the other hand, some bad news related t

It is contended that only good news should be broadcast on TV by media. While I agree because it is valuable for society I also believe other news related to crime, rape, robbery also telecast on news by this people aware time to time. In this essay I will examine my prospective in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, there are numerous points behind this statement internal and main point is that it is valuable for society if media reports the good news such as new development in the country. In other words, if government or any private firm promote any new facilities in the city by hearing good news people well aware about new development in the city and get offered from that sites. Moreover, good news always give reputation in the front of the world by the progress of new the thing for example, in japan when metro is launched every nation give the contract to Japan about the settlement in their city which assists to boost the economy. On the other hand, some bad news related to crime also broadcast on television because it helps to people which things are happened in the world and most of the people raise the voice For instance in India the rape case in Delhi 2014 victim suffers from critical condition when people aware about the happening common people raise their voice with that victim girl and take responsibility to give justice to that girl after the punishment of the rapist. In addition, some robbery news about the people which they adopt some say free measurement in their homes and city before the situation occurs. In conclusion I would like to reiterate that both the news are good for the society bad news give information about the development and bad news give the evidence about the safety measurement.

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