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It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today's world?

Our world is becoming unstable and unpredictable, so saving money can be fincancial cushion to prevent people from various circumctances which might put person in trouble. I believe that earned money has to be spent wisely and saved money shoul be invested. Nedless to say, that many products which sold on the market nowadays are worthless. In order not to run out of money, person should plan his/her budget accordingly. It's better to make a list of items which are really essential and follow it during the shopping time. It's also recommended to record all expences to have better idea of monthly spendings. Following budge is the only way for savings, so everyone should not go beyound limit. It; s also vital to take care of credit cards and amount of money taken from the bank. Sometimes people don't realize that taken loan can eat up to 50% of the sallary. Unfortunately saving money is not enough to stay strong on the feet. Another important thing is to invest money as inflation might affect it. There are number of various financial instruments which enable to double your savings. For examle deposit gives extra 7% to income, it won; t make you rich over night but will allow you to avoid negative impat of inflation. Additional way to increase savings is to participate in IPO via stock-market platform. However its a risky way to invest money but result is worthwile. In conclusion, it doesn't mater how much you save but it; s important to collect money regulary. Even small amount in the beginning can lead you to stability after sometime/
Our world is becoming unstable and unpredictable,
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saving
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money
can be
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fincancial
cushion to
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prevent
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people
from various
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circumctances
which might put person in trouble. I believe that earned
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money
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has to
be spent
wisely
and saved
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money
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shoul
be invested
.
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Nedless
to say, that
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many
products which sold on the market nowadays are worthless. In order not to run out of
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money
, person should plan his/her budget
accordingly
. It's better to
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make
a list of items which are
really
essential and follow it during the shopping time. It's
also
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recommended to record
all
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expences
to have better
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idea
of monthly
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spendings
. Following budge is the
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only
way for
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savings
,
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so
everyone should not go
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beyound
limit. It; s
also
vital to take care of credit cards and amount of
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money
taken from the bank.
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Sometimes
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people
don't realize that taken loan can eat up to 50% of the
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sallary
. Unfortunately
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saving
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money
is not
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enough
to stay strong on the feet. Another
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important
thing is to invest
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money
as inflation might affect it. There are
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number of
various financial instruments which enable to double your
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savings
. For
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examle
deposit gives extra 7% to income, it
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won; t
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make
you rich
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over night
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but
will
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allow
you to avoid
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negative
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impat
of inflation. Additional way to increase
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savings
is to participate in IPO via stock-market platform.
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However
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its
a risky way to invest
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money
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but
result is
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worthwile
.
In conclusion
, it doesn't
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mater
how much you save
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it; s
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important
to collect
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money
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regulary
. Even
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small
amount in the beginning can lead you to stability after sometime/
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IELTS essay It is better to save money than to spend it. How far Is saving more important than spending in today's world?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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