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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be reading everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

There is no doubt that these days reading online articles and news have become very popular. However, the question “ will books and written newspapers be bought by people in the upcoming years? “ is considered one of the most controversial issues today. This essay will examine this phenomenon considering both point of views. After that I will give my own opinion. On one side of the argument there are some people who argue that there will not be any printed newspapers and they will be relying on online news and E-books. The reason they believe that is because of the popularity of social media. People tend to get most of the information from their smartphones and the internet. Instagram, for example has lots of news accounts that share news from any place of the world. Moreover, it is also possible to say that most of the students depend on electronic books and resources for their education and academic research. They find it easier to find the details they want for their essays and assignments. One good illustration for this is a study that a renowned magazine made. This study proves that students who study from electronic books and articles usually get higher scores. On the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that copies of printed newspapers are much more trustworthy than online sites. People often have this opinion because the news that are written on papers are from well-known companies. This will make the organizations afraid to spread fake news because they will lose their reputation and they might be sued. A second point is that great scientists and professors usually like to write their books and sell them to libraries. This will force students and researchers to buy these books and not get them for free. As we can see there is no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that books and printed news are very essential in our life and they will not disappear in the future.
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have become
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very
popular.
However
, the question
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“
will
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books
and written newspapers be
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bought
by
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people
in the upcoming years? “
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is
considered one of the most controversial issues
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today
. This essay will examine this phenomenon considering both point of views.
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After
that I will give my
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own
opinion.

On one side of the argument there are
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some
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people
who argue that there will not be any printed
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newspapers and
they will be relying on online
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news
and E-books. The reason they believe
that is
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because
of the popularity of social media.
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People
tend to
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get
most of the information from their smartphones and the internet. Instagram,
for example
has lots of
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news
accounts that share
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news
from any place of the world.
Moreover
, it is
also
possible to say that most of the students depend on electronic
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books
and resources for their education and academic research. They find it easier to find the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
they want for their essays and assignments. One
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good
illustration for this is a study that a renowned magazine made. This study proves that students who study from electronic
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books
and articles
usually
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get
higher scores.

On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is
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often
argued that copies of printed newspapers are much more trustworthy than online sites.
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People
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often
have this opinion
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because
the
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news
that
are written
on papers are from well-known
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companies
. This will
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make
the organizations afraid to spread fake
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news
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because
they will lose their
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reputation and
they might
be sued
. A second point is that great scientists and professors
usually
like to write their
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books
and sell them to libraries. This will force students and researchers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
these
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books
and not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
them for free.

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As
we can
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see
there is no easy answers to this question. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that
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books
and printed
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news
are
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very
essential in our
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life and
they will not disappear in the future.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be reading everything they want online without paying. with this statement

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
347 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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