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It is better to eat food which is produced locally by small farmers rather than food produced by 'factory farming' and transported long distances

It is better to eat food which is produced locally by small farmers rather than food produced by 'factory farming' and transported long distances Y272V
In recent years, there is an ongoing debate on how to give an appropriate diet to population of each state. This view is held by some that there are more benefits in consuming foods which are produced in indigenous areas by farmers, as opposed to food delivered from remote lands or made in factories. While some food may be novelty which are no produced locally, l wholeheartedly belive that the health of people should be considered the most crucial in each circumstance. Due to inquisitivness, mankind always tries to deguste delicacy throughout the life, as unusual things make room for something in many cases. To illustrate, it could be a complication finding foreign fruits or vegetables, taken from another viewpoint, people can take unforgettable memories which are enough to their life that provide strong energy. In tandem with this, merchandise of factory farming appeals to myriad of people in a positive way. However, as junk food has a negative influence over humans, the quality of food transported long distances or by factory farming might have been seen some defect. The reason why l support the products of aborigen-farmers is that the potential of becoming food to eat invalid is low when the delivery does not take too much time to local stores. As a consequence, fresh food is purchased by people regularly. To conclude, although humans can take some impressions by eating something novel or in appearance in high quality by factory farming, they should put their consideration to healthy food in my view
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that there are more benefits in consuming
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foods
which
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in indigenous areas by farmers, as opposed to
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food
delivered from remote lands or made in
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factories
. While
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some
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food
may be novelty which are no produced
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should
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the most crucial in each circumstance. Due to
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inquisitivness
, mankind always tries to
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delicacy throughout the life, as unusual things
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make
room for something in
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cases. To illustrate, it could be a complication finding foreign fruits or vegetables, taken from another viewpoint,
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people
can take unforgettable memories which are
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enough
to their life that provide strong energy. In tandem with this, merchandise of
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factory
farming appeals to myriad of
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people
in a
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positive
way.
However
, as junk
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food
has a
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negative
influence over humans, the quality of
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food
transported long distances or by
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factory
farming might have been
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seen
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some
defect. The reason why l support the products of
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aborigen-farmers
is that the potential of becoming
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food
to eat invalid is low when the delivery does not take too much time to local stores. As a consequence, fresh
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food
is
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by
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people
regularly
.
To conclude
, although humans can take
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some
impressions by eating something novel or in appearance in high quality by
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factory
farming, they should put their consideration to healthy
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food
in my
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IELTS essay It is better to eat food which is produced locally by small farmers rather than food produced by 'factory farming' and transported long distances

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
253 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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