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It is better for students to live away from the home during their university studies rather than sataying home with their parents

It is better for students to live away from the home during their university studies rather than sataying home with their parents Xol8Y
Studying abroad is commonly way of learning productively. It is argued that for university students it would be better study abroad while their own study live than at home with their own mother and father. I believe that this avenue of learning is better and much more important as it lays The Foundations for future achievement and wider success as I shall show. There are several reasons why I would argue choosing education abroad for students. Firstly, studing abroad is more and more important for any person who come to learn and of course him or her own country It is useful too. as they can bring any qualifications and developed things which is unkown for their country from the country they came to study. For example, I remember one guy who is my older friend went to America for him study and then he came back with new type of avtomobile, treckor, and now this kind of transport is widely used among the population of Uzbekistan. In addition to this abroad study can give a chance to get to know other culture other tradition and new other new friends. To take tradition and culture, these actually provide with the information related to this country and other things as well these informations and other things cause rising significantly world-view of studing. While by meeting new friends this student take also more datas of these new friend was another country. In conclusion, there are many beneficial forms of education abroad on the other hand there will be any feelings like homesickness however, i believe abroad study ia much more important and better than staying with parents at home.
Studying
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is
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way of learning
productively
. It
is argued
that for university students it would be better
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study
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abroad
while their
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own
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study
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live
than at home with their
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own
mother and father. I believe that this avenue of learning is better and much more
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important
as it lays The Foundations for future achievement and wider success as I shall
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show
.

There are several reasons why I would argue choosing education
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abroad
for students.
Firstly
,
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studing
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abroad
is more and more
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important
for any person who
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come
to learn and
of course
him or her
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own
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country
It is useful too.
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as
they can bring any qualifications and developed things which is
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unkown
for their
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country
from the
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country
they came to study.

For example
, I remember one guy who is my older
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friend
went to America for him
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study and
then he came back with
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new
type of
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avtomobile
,
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treckor
, and
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now
this kind of transport is
widely
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used
among the population of Uzbekistan.

In addition
to this
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abroad
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study
can give a chance to
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get
to know
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other
culture
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other
tradition and
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new
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other
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new
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friends
. To take tradition and culture, these actually provide with the information related to this
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country
and
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other
things
as well
these
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informations
and
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other
things cause rising
significantly
world-view of
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studing
.
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by meeting
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new
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friends
this student take
also
more
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datas
of these
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new
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friend
was another country.

In conclusion
, there are
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many
beneficial forms of education
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abroad
on the
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other
hand there will be any feelings like homesickness
however
,
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i
believe
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abroad
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ia
much more
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important
and better than staying with parents at home.
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IELTS essay It is better for students to live away from the home during their university studies rather than sataying home with their parents

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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