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It is becoming increasingly popular to maintain a healthy lifestyle in today’s life. Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is becoming increasingly popular to maintain a healthy lifestyle in today’s life. Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief. do0g7
Nowadays, having a healthy behaviour is becoming a priority in people's lives and such people are increasing every day. Some part of people claim that it is a positive aspect of our lives, another part stays in the opposite position. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a healthy lifestyle. At first, a healthy lifestyle begins with fitness and people can transform their way to better. They refuse harmful habits that lead to their hazardous effects. For instance, the likelihood of disease dwindles and you can ensure a long life for yourself. If you choose the right way you can avoid premature death. Healthy people live to enjoy and very simplified without addiction to medicine and these people get energy from the sun to produce work. as a result, they take all positive from life and boasted that there are ideal. The advent of computer technology in general and smartphones, in particular, has accelerated a more passive lifestyle around the world. Frankly, people start to do nothing and have a detrimental balance of sleep, lack of healthy foods with vitamins that your organism needs always. Therefore, if you do not concern about your health you can addict to a lot of medicines and the hazard of overweight come closer because of the low movements of people. To sum up, people destroy themselves with a passive behaviour. Finally, by following a healthy diet plan, you can prevent overweight and obesity, so it’s extremely important to include the right types of food in your daily diet and exercise daily, avoid passivity.
Nowadays, having a
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behaviour
is becoming a priority in
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and such
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people
are increasing every day.
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Some
part of
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people
claim that it is a
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positive
aspect of our
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lives
, another part stays in the opposite position. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a
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healthy
lifestyle.

At
first
, a
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healthy
lifestyle
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begins
with fitness and
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people
can transform their way to better. They refuse harmful habits that lead to their hazardous effects.
For instance
, the likelihood of disease dwindles and you can ensure a long life for yourself.
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If
you choose the right way you can avoid premature death.
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Healthy
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people
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live
to enjoy and
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very
simplified without addiction to medicine and these
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people
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get
energy from the sun to produce work.
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as
a result, they take all
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positive
from life and boasted that there are ideal.

The advent of computer technology
in general
and smartphones,
in particular
, has accelerated a more passive lifestyle around the world.
Frankly
,
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people
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start
to do nothing and have a detrimental balance of sleep, lack of
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healthy
foods with vitamins that your organism needs always.
Therefore
, if you do not concern about your health you can addict to
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a lot of
medicines and the hazard of overweight
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come
closer
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because
of the low movements of
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people
. To sum up,
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people
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destroy
themselves with a passive
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behaviour
.

Finally
, by following a
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healthy
diet plan, you can
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prevent
overweight and obesity,
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so
it’s
extremely
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important
to include the right types of food in your daily diet and exercise daily, avoid passivity.
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IELTS essay It is becoming increasingly popular to maintain a healthy lifestyle in today’s life. Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief.

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4 paragraphs
261 words
7.5
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