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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university what are the advantages and disadvantages of this

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university what are the advantages and disadvantages of this GkKm
Nowadays education is on peak every parents wants to educate their child among studenyt it is frequently popular to take year break after completing school and before going to university In upcoming paragraphs I would like to discuss advantages and disadvantages of this trend. After completing schools their is limited public university and seats are also limited so every year thousand of undergraduate passed out from school and only few get admission on drream university After one year gap they will get sufficient time to prepare for their entrance examination which is most precious advantage of year gap between school and university. Another main advantage is that scholar will get abundance of time to spend along with their parents and family for enjoyment and learning family things which does not taught by any school and university. for Instance i had completed my class 12 on the contrary I did admit into my dream university then I take one year break for preparation and after that I will get admission and also learn new things from spending time along with family. Every things has two aspect likewise every coin have two outcome head and tail som after highlighting merits of year gap I would like to through a number of light on disadvantages of year drop. Firstly junior will late one year a plethora of parents wants their graduated earlier as possible because they cannot afford high fees and dependent on children job. furthermore, mostly children did not revise their concept during year break which cause inconsistency on study and make graduate weak in their fields. For instance during two to three month break of summer vacation children did not take care of their study and forget each and every point of study. In conclusion, it has several advantages besides disadvantages on the contrary I believe that there should be year break between school and university due to the fact it will enhance children capability and give extra time to spend at relatives homes which depict insight into reality and scholar will more focus on their study and prepare well for their upcoming university
Nowadays education is on peak every parents wants to educate their child among
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frequently
popular to take
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year
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break
after completing
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school
and
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before
going to
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university
In upcoming paragraphs I would like to discuss
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advantages
and disadvantages of this trend.

After completing
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schools
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their
is limited
public
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university
and seats are
also
limited
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so
every
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year
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thousand
of undergraduate passed out from
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school
and
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only
few
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get
admission on
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drream
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university
After one
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year
gap they will
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get
sufficient
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time
to prepare for their entrance examination which is most precious
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advantage
of
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year
gap between
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school
and
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university
. Another main
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advantage
is that scholar will
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get
abundance of
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time
to spend along with their parents and family for enjoyment and learning family things which does not taught by any
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school
and
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university
.
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for
Instance
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i
had completed my
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class
12
on the contrary
I did admit into my dream
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university
then I take one
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year
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break
for preparation and after that I will
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get
admission and
also
learn new things from spending
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time
along with family.

'Each', 'every', 'either' and 'neither' are used with singular. Did you mean "all"?
Every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "thing"?
things
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has
two
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aspect
likewise
every coin have two outcome head and tail
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som
after highlighting merits of
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year
gap I would like to through a number of light on disadvantages of
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year
drop.
Firstly
junior will late one
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year
a plethora of parents wants their graduated earlier
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as
possible
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because
they cannot afford high fees and dependent on
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children
job.
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furthermore
,
mostly
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children
did not revise their concept during
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year
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break
which cause inconsistency on study and
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make
graduate weak in their fields.
For instance
during two to three month
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break
of summer vacation
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children
did not take care of their study and forget each and every point of study.

In conclusion
, it has several
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advantages
besides
disadvantages
on the contrary
I believe that there should be
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year
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break
between
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school
and
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university
due to the fact it will enhance
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children
capability and give extra
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time
to spend at relatives homes which depict insight into reality and scholar will more focus on their study and prepare well for their upcoming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
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IELTS essay It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university what are the advantages and disadvantages of this

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  American English
4 paragraphs
352 words
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