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• It has been universally acknowleged that the knot of transportation and accommodation in big metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day.

• It has been universally acknowleged that the knot of transportation and accommodation in big metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day. some authorities stimulates the businesses to move from cities to country side. In my perspective, the merits of this development outweigh the demerits. • To begin with, there are myraid advantages of this trend. Firstly, this practice burgeoning the employment opportunities in rural areas, because of this, folks will able to provide the food and shelter to their near and dears. To exemplify, in China, officials fosters the businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Therefore, the unemployment rate in China declined sharply. Apart from this, people can learn the many valuable skills because of this practice and it will lead to their career growth. • In addition to this, people will get the relief from hustle and bustle of city life. as a result, they do not face any difficulty in finding the accommodation and transportation in cities. To illustrate, officals who implemented this practice in thier nation provide a sigh of relief to their citizens. However, knot associated with this development cannot be overlooked. First of all, only businesses are not responsible for enhancing the transportation and accommodation problem in cities. There are also other factors which are contributing to this problem such as overpopulation and less public amenities bestowed by the government.
• It has been
universally
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acknowleged
that the knot of transportation and accommodation in
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big
metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day.
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some
authorities
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stimulates
the businesses to
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move
from
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cities
to
This word is normally spelled as one.
country side
. In my perspective, the merits of this development outweigh the demerits.

• To
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begin
with, there are
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myraid
advantages of this trend.
Firstly
, this practice burgeoning the employment opportunities in rural areas,
because of this
, folks will able to provide the food and shelter to their near and dears. To exemplify, in China, officials fosters the businesses to
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move
from
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cities
to rural areas.
Therefore
, the unemployment rate in China declined
sharply
. Apart from this,
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people
can learn the
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many
valuable
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skills
because of this
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practice and
it will lead to their career growth.

•
In addition
to this,
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people
will
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get
the relief from hustle and bustle of city life.
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as
a result, they do not face any difficulty in finding the accommodation and transportation in
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cities
. To illustrate,
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officals
who implemented this practice in
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thier
nation provide a sigh of relief to their citizens.

However
, knot associated with this development cannot
be overlooked
.
Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.
First of all
,
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only
businesses are not responsible for enhancing the transportation and accommodation problem in
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cities
. There are
also
other factors which are contributing to this problem such as overpopulation and less public amenities bestowed by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.
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IELTS essay • It has been universally acknowleged that the knot of transportation and accommodation in big metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
228 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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