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As transportation and accommodation problem is increasing in many large cities,some governments encourage the businesses to move from cities to rural areas.does the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

• It has been universally acknowleged that the knot of transportation and accommodation in big metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day. Some authorities stimulates the businesses to move from cities to country side. In my perspective, the merits of this development outweigh the demerits. In conclusion, although this trend has more benefits, the demerits of this development cannot be neglected. Unless government will not expand their basic amenities, the problem will not eradicate.
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universally
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acknowleged
that the knot of transportation and accommodation in
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big
metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day.
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Some
authorities
You should probably use “stimulate”.
stimulates
the businesses to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
from cities to
This word is normally spelled as one.
country side
. In my perspective, the merits of this development outweigh the demerits.

In conclusion
, although this trend has more benefits, the demerits of this development cannot
be neglected
. Unless
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
will not expand their basic amenities, the problem will not eradicate.

IELTS essay As transportation and accommodation problem is increasing in many large cities, some governments encourage the businesses to move from cities to rural areas. does the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

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