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As transportation and accommodation problem is increasing in many large cities,some governments encourage the businesses to move from cities to rural areas.does the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

• It has been universally acknowleged that the knot of transportation and accommodation in big metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day. Some authorities stimulates the businesses to move from cities to country side. In my perspective, the merits of this development outweigh the demerits. In conclusion, although this trend has more benefits, the demerits of this development cannot be neglected. Unless government will not expand their basic amenities, the problem will not eradicate.

• It has been universally
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acknowleged
 that the knot of transportation and accommodation in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 authorities You should probably use “stimulate”.stimulate
stimulates
 the businesses to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 from cities to This word is normally spelled as one.countryside
country side
. In my perspective, the merits of this development outweigh the demerits.

In conclusion
, although this trend has more benefits, the demerits of this development cannot be neglected
. Unless This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 will not expand their basic amenities, the problem will not eradicate. 