Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

It has been known the use of automobiles contributes to environmental harm; however, the number of car-making industries and the frequency of driving are still on the climb. What are the reasons and how to reverse this trend?

It has been known the use of automobiles contributes to environmental harm; however, the number of car-making industries and the frequency of driving are still on the climb. What are the reasons and how to reverse this trend? wBJ7m

One of the most prevalent phenomena plaguing the entire societies is the ever-growing number of automobiles. Despite people have known that the use of vehicles can contribute to environmental harm, the number of frequent driving and car manufacturing is still on an upward trend. It is necessary to look at the inherent root then seek for the possible countermeasures. The issue of excessive use of cars could be accounted for a kaleidoscope of reasons. For one thing, with the state of the art technology and science, technical barriers are being removed, therefore triggering a wide range of industries to produce a myriad of automobiles so as to meet demands. Moreover, due to the surging of the public's wealth conditions, cars are now more affordable for people to purchase, thus, boosting the number of cars to a culmination. For another, scientists have unearthed different kinds of energy forms for people to choose from. For instance, shale oil, gas, or even ethanol. Throughout these multiplied forms of energy, the energy price has dropped dramatically. Hence, raising people's willingness to have personal vehicles, which can cause profound repercussions to the environment. On the other hand, there is a broad spectrum of strategies to address this kind of trend. For example, governments need to institute a complete urban design program. Well-designed urban planning can not only decrease the number of cars but also set up a good environment for citizens to live in, such as entrenching a good bike scheme may increase the public's willingness to ride bicycles, this practice does not only drop the rate of air pollution and also provides people opportunities to mitigate stress that they accumulated through their lifetime, which can cause a positive influence on people's mental conditions. In a nutshell, despite the problems of the excessive use of cars can lead to damages to the environment. Nonetheless, the causes must be located in the first place while effective solutions have to be designed to counter the problem. It is probably the most prudent way to address the issue related to the overuse of cars.

One of the most prevalent phenomena plaguing the entire societies is the ever-growing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of automobiles. Despite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have known that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of vehicles can contribute to environmental harm, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of frequent driving and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 manufacturing is still
 on an upward trend. It is necessary to look at the inherent root then seek for the possible countermeasures.

The issue of excessive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 could be accounted
 for a kaleidoscope of reasons. For one thing, with the Did you mean "state-of-the-art"?state-of-the-art
state of the art
 technology and science, technical barriers are being removed
, therefore
 triggering a wide range of industries to produce a myriad of automobiles 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 demands. Moreover
, due to the surging of the public's wealth conditions, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 more affordable for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
, thus
, boosting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 to a culmination. For another, scientists have unearthed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 kinds of energy forms for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to choose from. For instance
, shale oil, gas, or even ethanol. Throughout these multiplied forms of energy, the energy price has dropped dramatically
. Hence
, raising This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's willingness to have personal vehicles, which can cause profound repercussions to the environment.

On the other hand
, there is a broad spectrum of strategies to address this kind of trend. For example
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 need to institute a complete urban design program. Well-designed urban planning can not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 decrease the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 set up a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 environment for citizens to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in, such as entrenching a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 bike scheme may increase the public's willingness to ride bicycles, this practice does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 drop the rate of air pollution and also
 provides You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 opportunities to mitigate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 that they accumulated through their lifetime, which can cause a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 influence on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's mental conditions.

In a nutshell, despite the problems of the excessive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 can lead to damages to the environment. Nonetheless, the causes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be located
 in the first
 place while effective solutions This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be designed
 to counter the problem. It is probably
 the most prudent way to address the issue related to the overuse of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
. 