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Is smacking/ hitting the best way to discipline children?

Is smacking/ hitting the best way to discipline children? Donep
It is genrally believed that corporal punishment which is the most useful means would raise a child a good behavior person. While this view is true in some cases, I am more convinced that there are several other methods to develop the mindset of a juvenile from its root. This essay will outline the effects of hitting a youngster and then come to my perspective of bringing up a kid without hurting them.
It is
genrally
believed that corporal punishment which is the most useful means would raise a child a
good
behavior person. While this view is true in
some
cases, I am more convinced that there are several other methods to develop the mindset of a juvenile from its root. This essay will outline the effects of hitting a youngster and then
come
to my perspective of bringing up a kid without hurting them.
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IELTS essay Is smacking/ hitting the best way to discipline children?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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