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Investigate the damage of high velocity bird impact on three different model wings by using Coupled Eulerian-Lagrangian (CEL) approach

Investigate the damage of high velocity bird impact on three different model wings by using Coupled Eulerian-Lagrangian (CEL) approach OVleE

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