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Introduction of learning university education

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“An education isn’t how much you have committed to memory, or even how much you know. It’s being able to differentiate between what you know and what you don’t. ”, said Anatole France, a France poet, journalist, and novelist with several best-sellers. So now a day some people have changed their mind, they think completing university education isn’t the best way to get a good job, they think getting experience and developing soft skills are more important, why do they think like that? The university education is important or not? Can we get a good job without learning university education? We may have this question in our head. You will completing university education or not is very important for your future, you should think and choose carefully to get the best way for your future. This essay will analyze the advantages and disadvantages of university education
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isn’t how much you have committed to memory, or even how much you know. It’s being able to differentiate between what you know and what you don’t. ”, said Anatole France, a France poet, journalist, and novelist with several best-sellers.
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IELTS essay Introduction of learning university education

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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