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Introduction .Discussion essay.

Introduction .Discussion essay. PVxaK
It is commony believed that in nowadays jails play a big role for our safety. Criminals who robb, kill, murder or commit crimes connected with money that is to say coruption they will punished in prisions even though they did not pay taxes or commited petty crimes. Some individuals say all inmates ought to be locked up in gaols, whereas other argue there would be some different methods to punish them. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion in the paragraph which will follow.
It is
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commony
believed that
nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: "nowadays".
in nowadays
jails play a
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big
role for our safety. Criminals who
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robb
, kill, murder or commit crimes connected with money
that is
to say
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coruption
they will
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punished
in
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prisions
even though
they did not pay taxes or
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commited
petty crimes.
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Some
individuals say all inmates ought to
be locked
up in
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gaols
, whereas other argue there would be
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some
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different
methods to punish them. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion in the paragraph which will follow.
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IELTS essay Introduction .Discussion essay.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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