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Introduction about traditional handicrafts in Oman

Introduction about traditional handicrafts in Oman 7J955
Oman has an ancient history of cultural heritage. Omanis people succeeded in achieving lifestyle combines history and present day. Culture directly influenced the different forms of arts in the country. The crafts in Oman express national identity. Handicrafts and traditional industries occupy a wide area of ​​Omani heritage and these crafts and industries have continued to the present day. Handicrafts are made from simple natural resources. In the past, they used crafts to meet basic needs, but now people are use it for decorative purposes. Furthermore, Oman has many handicrafts and in each type of handicrafts they are use a various methods and materials. This report focuses on traditional handicrafts in Oman and what the products and methods which craftsmen are use it, also the role of government and institutions in preserving crafts.
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people
succeeded in achieving lifestyle combines history and present day. Culture
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different
forms of arts in the country. The
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crafts
in Oman express national identity.
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Handicrafts
and traditional industries occupy a wide area of ​​Omani heritage and these
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crafts
and industries have continued to the present day.
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Handicrafts
are made
from simple natural resources. In the past, they
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used
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crafts
to
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now
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it for decorative purposes.
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handicrafts
and in each type of
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handicrafts
they are
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use
a various methods and materials. This report focuses on traditional
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handicrafts
in Oman and what the products and methods which craftsmen are
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use
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crafts
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IELTS essay Introduction about traditional handicrafts in Oman

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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