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INTRODUCTION ABOUT MYSELF

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MY NAME IS ANAMIKA. I AM FROM JALANDHAR. I HAVE COMPLETED MY HIGHER STUDIES FROM THE GURUKUL WITH 75. 4. I AM GRADUATED FROM LYALLPUR KHALSA COLLEGE JALANDHAR. I LOVE TO LISTEN SONGS AND PASSIONATED TO DO NAIL ART. MY MOTHER TONGUE IS PUNJABI. I LOVE TO TRAVEL ADVENTUROUS PLACES. I AM VERY QUICK LEARNER. I LOVE TO COOK FOOD WHENEVER I GOT SOME FREE TIME. I LOVE PINK COLOUR. I AM FOOD LOVER. I LOVE TO GO FOR SHOPPING.
MY NAME IS
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ANAMIKA
. I AM FROM JALANDHAR. I HAVE COMPLETED MY HIGHER STUDIES FROM THE
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GURUKUL
WITH 75. 4.
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I
AM GRADUATED
FROM LYALLPUR
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KHALSA
COLLEGE JALANDHAR.
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I
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LOVE
TO LISTEN SONGS AND
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PASSIONATED
TO DO NAIL ART. MY MOTHER TONGUE IS PUNJABI. I
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LOVE
TO TRAVEL ADVENTUROUS PLACES. I AM
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VERY
QUICK LEARNER.
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I
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LOVE
TO COOK FOOD WHENEVER I
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GOT
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SOME
FREE TIME.
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I
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LOVE
PINK
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COLOUR
.
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I
AM FOOD LOVER.
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I
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LOVE
TO GO FOR SHOPPING.
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IELTS essay INTRODUCTION ABOUT MYSELF

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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