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introduce your favorite sport

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My favorite sport is badminton, and I think it is a suitable sport for girls like me. I have been playing badminton since I was 12, and it is very good for me to improve my height. It needs at least two players to play, and we have to use rackets to hit a shuttlecock over a net. However, we can always play it in double form with two players each side or in larger teams. Points are counted when we can strike the shuttlecock across the net, and it lands within the opponent’s side of the court. We can also score when our opponent hit the shuttlecock but it does not go over the net or within our side. The scoring one can serve the shuttlecock, and it does not matter if the score is from the server and the receiver. There is one referee who sits on a very high chair right outside of the court and next to the net. He or she is the one who determines whether the shuttlecock touches the net or goes outside of the limit. Each game is played up to 21 points, if both of the players reach to 20 points, then they need to continue until one of them gains a two - point lead, for example 24 - 22. There are three sets in a match, and whoever win out of two sets, he or she wins the whole game. This is a quite simple sport without too many rules, and it does not require an ideal base of strength. Most of my girlfriends choose it as their main subject in Physical Education class, and we can both have fun and improve our health by it.
My favorite sport is badminton, and I
think
it is a suitable sport for girls like me. I have been playing badminton since I was 12, and it is
very
good
for me to
improve
my height. It needs at least two players to play, and we
have to
use
rackets to hit a shuttlecock over a net.
However
, we can always play it in double form with two players each side or in larger teams.
Points
are counted
when we can strike the shuttlecock across the net, and it lands within the opponent’s side of the court. We can
also
score when our opponent hit the shuttlecock
but
it does not go over the net or within our side. The scoring one can serve the shuttlecock, and it does not matter if the score is from the server and the receiver. There is one referee who sits on a
very
high chair right
outside of
the court and
next
to the net. He or she is the one who determines whether the shuttlecock touches the net or goes
outside of
the limit. Each game
is played
up to 21
points
, if both of the players reach to 20
points
, then they need to continue until one of them gains a two
-
point
lead,
for example
24 - 22
. There are three sets in a match, and whoever win out of two sets, he or she wins the whole game. This is a quite simple sport without too
many
rules
, and it does not require an ideal base of strength. Most of my girlfriends choose it as their main subject in Physical Education
class
, and we can both have fun and
improve
our health by it.
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IELTS essay introduce your favorite sport

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