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Internet- problems and solutions

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The internet has transformed our lives. Communicating information has become more comfortable through internet. Though there are numerous benefits of internet, we are facing problems which did not exist earlier. This essay will look into problems faced because of internet and feasible solutions for it. Firstly In spite of being very useful Internet created Problems like privacy issues and cyber crimes. Through internet we can perform activities like mailing, video calls, share photos, etc. This sometimes can be shared with wrong people fraudulently. Hence privacy is one of the major issues caused by wide spread use of internet. To illustrate, The information we share on Facebook can be misused by wrong people. The other major issue can be Cyber crime. Using the internet we make bank payments, and other financial transactions that can be hacked by cyber criminals. For instance, if we are not careful the cyber criminals can extract our personal information like ATM pin and account number which leads to financial fraud crimes. One possible solution to protect the users from privacy issues can be setting a strong passwords on their accounts and update every now and then. In addition users should very careful while sharing the information online. For example, one should try to avoid sharing their personal pictures and information on social accounts unnecessarily. On the other hand to tackle the issue of Cyber crimes, as per the cyber experts suggestion, users should be very careful while shopping online or performing a financial activity. unless there is a need, one should not share their credit card information or ATM pin. For instance, shopping on verified sites can avoid unnecessary payment frauds. To conclude, users should be very conscious and alert while sharing sensitive information through internet to avoid privacy issues and be safer with cybercrimes.
The internet has transformed our
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lives
. Communicating
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information
has become more comfortable through internet. Though there are numerous benefits of internet, we are facing problems which did not exist earlier. This essay will look into problems faced
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because
of internet and feasible solutions for it.

Firstly
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being
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useful Internet created Problems like privacy
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issues
and
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cyber
crimes. Through
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internet we
can perform activities like mailing, video calls, share photos, etc. This
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sometimes
can
be shared
with
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wrong
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people
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Hence
privacy is one of the major
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issues
caused by wide spread
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use
of internet. To illustrate, The
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information
we share on Facebook can
be misused
by
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wrong
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people
. The other major
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issue
can be
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Cyber
crime. Using the internet we
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make
bank payments, and other financial transactions that can
be hacked
by
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cyber
criminals.
For instance
, if we are not careful the
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cyber
criminals can extract our personal
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information
like ATM pin and account number which leads to financial fraud crimes.

One possible solution to protect the
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users
from privacy
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issues
can be setting a strong
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passwords
on their accounts and update every
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now
and then. In
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addition
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users
should
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careful while sharing the
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information
online.
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, one should try to avoid sharing their personal pictures and
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information
on social accounts
unnecessarily
.
On the other hand
to tackle the
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issue
of
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Cyber
crimes, as per the
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cyber
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experts
suggestion,
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users
should be
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very
careful while shopping online or performing a financial activity.
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unless
there is a need, one should not share their credit card
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information
or ATM pin.
For instance
, shopping on verified sites can avoid unnecessary payment frauds.

To conclude
,
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users
should be
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very
conscious and alert while sharing sensitive
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information
through internet to avoid privacy
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issues
and be safer with
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cybercrimes
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IELTS essay Internet- problems and solutions

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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