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Internet has destroyed communication among friends and family.” Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Internet has destroyed communication among friends and family. ” meX1

In modern society, the internet has become an integral part of our lives and when we started to use it effectively, our way of life changed too. When we use the internet, we will get new information experiences. However, I believe that the internet destroys friends and family communication. I would like to share with you my point of view. First of all, the internet use of young people has increased in recent times. Therefore, young people's communication with their family and friends has decreased. The decrease in communication affects the development of the growing children very much. These kids will be lonely and have no idea about the outside world. For example, they do not want to do an activity with their peers or elders as a result they are left alone. The second reason is that social media largely destroyed communications. People do not communicate with each other because everyone at home has a phone. Problems cannot be solved because they cannot communicate with each other and they are getting bigger. For example, On the other hand, people have opportunities that did not exist before. One of these opportunities is video talk, which has become widespread in our lives with the pandemic. In this way, people communicated very well with each other, and their communication was strengthened. All in all, when internet use increases, we lose contact with people in our family it'll hurt our family. My opinion is that we won't hurt when we find the middle of everything.

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lives
 and when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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use
 it effectively
, our way of life This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 too. When we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the internet, we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 new information experiences. However
, I believe that the internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishesruins
destroys
 friends and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
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communication
. I would like to share with you my point of view.

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use
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people
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idea
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left
 alone.

The second reason is that social media largely
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destroyed
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other
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because
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because
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other
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people
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before
. One of these opportunities is video talk, which has become widespread in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
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people
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very
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other
, and their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionintelligencedeliveryconversationconnectioncontact
communication
was strengthened
.

All in all, when internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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people
 in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 it'll hurt our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. My opinion is that we won't hurt when we find the middle of everything. 