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Internet are using is positive or negative development ?

Internet are using is positive or negative development? 8LXrP
Owing to the advancement of technology, everyone are using internet for different purposes. By browsing on internet by people, they would cater number of tasks. l think that it is a not negative development. l will discuss it in detail in the upcoming praagraphs. There are several benefits of use the internet. First and the formost, as internet has very convenient as well as cheaper, masses can easily complete their task.
Owing to the advancement of technology, everyone
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are
using internet for
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different
purposes. By browsing on internet by
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people
, they would cater number of tasks.
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l
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think
that it is a not
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negative
development.
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l
will discuss it in detail in the upcoming
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praagraphs
. There are several benefits of
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use
the internet.
First
and the
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formost
, as internet has
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very
convenient
as well
as cheaper, masses can
easily
complete their task.
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IELTS essay Internet are using is positive or negative development?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
71 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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