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International migrations have become a common trend among students . What are the main reasons behind this? What effects does it put ?

International migrations have become a common trend among students. What are the main reasons behind this? What effects does it put? kgAVO
The students want to move other land to make their future. Students have opportunity to improve lifestyle and gain a knowledge related other countries as other lands are provide high rate of job opportunities. First and the foremost, mentioned reason that introduce of this process of international migration is student choose to improve lifestyle. Some especially youngsters want to migrate other nations for their higher education that some colleges are providing facilities such as material, discount in the fees, scholarships as well as after complete the education college are conduct the interviews for high ranks companies. For example, Australia and china students move to America for their study as other countries college are provide global knowledge and free accommodation and best opportunities to students do part time jobs. However, homeland countries can not provide these facilities that pupils make their career in own country because some business field students want to improve communication skill and confidence level since with the help of this they can deal with high rank of companies and to sale their product in any country. apart from this, they can easily clear their interview and showing the best presentation in audience. In conclusion, I think that migrate other country is best way to learn about other culture and get knowledge about education as well adopt new skills related jobs, education, communication.
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culture and
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education
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IELTS essay International migrations have become a common trend among students. What are the main reasons behind this? What effects does it put?

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