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Integrated writing "Global warming" summarize main points in the listening passage and show how it adds information on the main ideas in the reading passage.

Integrated writing " Global warming" summarize main points in the listening passage and show how it adds information on the main ideas in the reading passage. JoYr5
The reading passage is about the causes and effects of the global warming; which is defined as an increase in the temperature of the earth. Meanwhile, the listening passage adds more information about the correlation of the global warming and politics, as well as it reflects the public opinion on the global warming. First of all, the professor in the lecture, points out to the economic costs that many developing countries are confronting due to the unsustainable life style that rich people are living, and their unconstraint fossil's use for entertainment issues, which according to th. . .
The reading passage is about the causes and effects of the global warming; which
is defined
as an increase in the temperature of the earth. Meanwhile, the listening passage
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adds
more information about the correlation of the global warming and politics,
as well
as it reflects the public opinion on the global warming.

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First of all
, the professor in the lecture, points out to the economic costs that
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many
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developing countries
are confronting due to the unsustainable life style that rich
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people
are living, and their
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unconstraint
fossil's
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use
for entertainment issues, which according to
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th
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IELTS essay Integrated writing " Global warming" summarize main points in the listening passage and show how it adds information on the main ideas in the reading passage.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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