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Integrated- Painting

Integrated- Painting g58E3
The reading passage states that the painting "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet' is not a work of Rembrandt by presenting several details of the painting that is unusual from Rembrandt's real paintings. However, the lecturer contradicts all the points of the reading, and provides supporting details to prove that this painting is painted by Rembrandt. To begin with, the reading passage that the clothes of the woman in the painting show inconsistency as the white cap represents the style that servants would wear, but the luxurious fur collar cannot be afforded by servants. This e. . .
The reading passage states that the
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painting
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Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet' is not a work of Rembrandt by presenting several
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details
of the
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painting
that is
unusual from Rembrandt's real
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paintings
.
However
, the lecturer contradicts all the points of the reading, and provides supporting
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details
to prove that this
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painting
is painted
by Rembrandt.

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begin
with, the reading passage that the clothes of the woman in the
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painting
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show
inconsistency as the white cap represents the style that servants would wear,
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but
the luxurious fur collar cannot
be afforded
by servants. This e.
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IELTS essay Integrated- Painting

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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