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Innocent criminal , ISIS children

Innocent criminal , ISIS children m1Yxd

A month ago, a Young announcer from an Arabic channel entered Al-Hol camp, located in the Syrian Desert, with her camera staff, to report, as she claims, the reality of life in the ISIS detention camp for women and children, after the final battles with ISIS in 2019. The scene seems repetitive, Tents scattered across the desert, lacking any degree of human need and privacy, the anchor tries to talk to the women who refuse to answer her questions and run away from her camera. then she decides to go to the children who were curiously watching her. One kid points out that he didn't want to talk to her because she has a black weapon, the microphone she was carrying and he had never seen and known before. Another child saied that will not talk to her because she is not veil So she is an infidel, at that moment the announcer insists to ask the kids the big question, Why am I an infidel? What will you do to me when you grow up? A deep and unknown childish voice answers We will kill you. Here, at this winning moment, she confirmed the premise she came for and continued annoying the children until they throw stones at her.

A month ago, a Young announcer from an Arabic channel entered Possible spelling mistake found.AlcoholAlgol
Al-Hol
 camp, located in the Syrian Desert, with her camera staff, to report, as she claims, the reality of life in the ISIS detention camp for women and children, after the final battles with ISIS in 2019.

The scene seems repetitive, Tents scattered across the desert, lacking any degree of human need and privacy, the anchor tries to talk to the women who refuse to answer her questions and run away from her camera.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
 she decides to go to the children who were curiously
 watching her.

One kid points out that he didn't want to talk to her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 she has a black weapon, the microphone she was Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).carrying, and
carrying and
 he had never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 and known This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
.

Another child Possible spelling mistake found.saidsailedsavedseizedsawedshied
saied
 that will not talk to her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 she is not veil This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 she is an infidel, at that moment the announcer The usual collocation for "insists" is "on" not "to". Did you mean "insists on asking"?insists on asking
insists to ask
 the kids the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 question, Why am I an infidel? What will you do to me when you grow up?

A deep and unknown childish voice answers We will kill you.

Here, at this winning moment, she confirmed the premise she came for and continued annoying the children until they throw stones at her. 