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Write about the following topic. Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. Do the benefits of information and technology outweigh the disadvantages? Information and technology is a great gift to mankind which is playing a key role in the day-to-day life of a person. Information technology has created a great impact on society that everybody these days have got used to it. For example, information technology has been playing a key role in the day-to-day life of a student, an employee and a businessman when the COVID-19 pandemic has broken out. Everybody was able to complete their routine being anywhere in the world. Information technology has evolved a lot that it made a simple web meeting to online payment happens in one click. Information technology used these days is saving a lot of time by helping to finish a task that takes so much time to finish. Information technology is also playing the role of resource handler where one can find any information or data they require. On the other hand information technology is having many disadvantages. It can be a curse to mankind if not used properly. Information technology is replacing the man force with machines everywhere, this can be a great threat to mankind. Replacing humans with machines in everyday life leads to unemployment and pushes a lot of people into the poverty line. This may also lead to a stage machine that can control the humans. So it is our responsibility to use the information technology properly in a proper way to make the earth a place fro all to live happily.
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is changing
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aspects of our
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lives
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now
dominates our home, leisure and work activities. Do the benefits of
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and
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technology
outweigh the disadvantages?
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and
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technology
is a great gift to mankind which is playing a key role in the day-to-day life of a person.

Information
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technology
has created a great impact on society that everybody these days have
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to it.
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,
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information
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technology
has been playing a key role in the day-to-day life of a student, an employee and a businessman when the COVID-19 pandemic has broken out. Everybody was able to complete their routine being anywhere in the world.
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Information
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technology
has evolved a lot that it made a simple web meeting to online payment happens in one click.
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Information
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technology
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used
these days is saving
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a lot of
time by helping to finish a task that takes
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much time to finish.
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is
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playing the role of resource handler where one can find any
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information
or data they require.

On the other hand
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technology
is having
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disadvantages. It can be a curse to mankind if not
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used
properly
.
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technology
is replacing the
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man
force with machines everywhere, this can be a great threat to mankind. Replacing humans with machines in everyday life leads to unemployment and pushes
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a lot of
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people
into the poverty line. This may
also
lead to a stage machine that can control the humans.
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it is our responsibility to
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use
the
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information
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technology
properly
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in a proper way
to
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make
the earth a place
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all to
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live
happily
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IELTS essay Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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