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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. ngro
There is no doubt that information technology has revolutionized every part of our lives and this world and it has also interfered with our personal and working lifestyle. There are many benefits as well as detriments of using technology. But I think life without technology would be incomplete. If we observe the lives of people in past, it is clear that there was no access to any vast source of information at that time. On the other hand, everyone is able to get any information related to any field, interest or activity and credit of this change goes to the internet. We are all connected to each other through the internet. With the invention of social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter etc, we can chat with our friends, family and relatives no matter in which part of the world they are living. People of the 21st century are living a totally different life than the generations of previous centuries. It has also provided people with the opportunity to work, trade and earn money from their desks. Video games, however, help the young generation in spending their leisure time effectively. There are plenty of educational websites such as Edx, Khan Academy, which are providing education free of cost to everyone. Although information technology provides us many benefits, its drawbacks can't be ignored. Many students are wasting their precious time by playing video games or watching movies. Face to face conversations has decreased significantly in recent years due to social media platforms, particularly Whatsapp. There is also a very big threat to humanity because of the technology's Artificial Intelligence (AI), which has a processing speed a hundred times more than human and it is alarming for us. Many platforms have top psychologists of this world whose job is to manipulate our thinking and behaviour and force us to buy products through their advertising skills. Overall, in my opinion, technology would have worse effects on humanity in future and the lifestyles of the coming generations. But it has become an inevitable part of our life.
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has revolutionized every part of our
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and this world and it has
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benefits
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technology
.
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life without
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would be incomplete.

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of
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clear
that there was no access to any vast source of
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, everyone is able to
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get
any
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information
related to any field, interest or activity and credit of this
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change
goes to the internet. We are all connected to each other through the internet. With the invention of social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter etc, we can chat with our friends, family and relatives no matter in which part of the world they are living.
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of the 21st century are living a
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different
life than the generations of previous centuries. It has
also
provided
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people
with the opportunity to work, trade and earn money from their desks. Video games,
however
,
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help
the young generation in spending their leisure
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time
effectively
. There are
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plenty
of educational websites such as
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Edx
, Khan Academy, which are providing education free of cost to everyone.

Although
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information
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technology
provides us
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many
benefits, its drawbacks can't be
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ignored
.
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students are wasting their precious
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time
by playing video games or watching movies. Face to face conversations has decreased
significantly
in recent years due to social media platforms,
particularly
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Whatsapp
. There is
also
a
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very
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big
threat to humanity
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because
of the technology's Artificial Intelligence (AI), which has a processing speed a hundred
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times
more than human and it is alarming for us.
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Many
platforms have top psychologists of this world whose job is to manipulate our thinking and
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behaviour
and force us to
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buy
products through their advertising
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skills
.

Overall
, in my opinion,
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technology
would have worse effects on humanity in future and the lifestyles of the coming generations.
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But
it has become an inevitable part of our life.

IELTS essay Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.

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