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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest? g5bE3
It is irrefutable that human activities are causing harm to the mother nature and her nurture. In this age and days, whatever humankind had done, it has has effect on environment. The entire ecosystem has begun to collapsing eventually leading to loss of biodiversity and extinction of species. This essay shall delve into various reasons behind this scenario along with remedial measures in the subsequent paragraphs. The first and foremost reason is pollution caused by human activities. Pollution of land air and water cause various problems. Due to land pollution mananiy medicinal plants and trees have been extincted, even the farmland also influenced by land pollution. To exemplify, In Japan, nuclear bomb explosion caused by America had caused extinction of many animal species and loss of biodiversity, instill today in the area of nuclear bomb explosion vegetation has wiped. To fortify further, loss of natural habitats of animal by over exploitation of land has shown significance impact on numbers of wild animals. Day by day human population has been increasing and due to that the cities and semi urban areas are lacking space and that causes expansion of urban areas by cutting the natural habitats of wild animals. For illustration, in recent survey by Indian wildlife section from last 50 years due to expansion of urban areas there is only 38% of wild areas are left in India in recent times. The solution to this situation can be done by the government as well as by people. Taciturn government policies can be implemented that stop over expansion of urban areas. Second, more wildlife sanctuaries could be found to protect the wild animals. Thirdly students should be aware of this scenario so taken act accordingly to protect the mother nature. To conclude, human affecting environment in many ways however this can be diminish by certain government policies and awareness of people.
It is irrefutable that
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human
activities are causing harm to the mother nature and her nurture. In this age and days, whatever humankind had done, it
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has has
effect on environment. The entire ecosystem has begun to collapsing
eventually
leading to loss of biodiversity and extinction of species. This essay shall delve into various reasons behind this scenario along with remedial measures in the subsequent paragraphs.

The
first
and foremost reason is
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pollution
caused by
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human
activities.
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Pollution
of
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land
air and water cause various problems. Due to
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land
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pollution
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mananiy
medicinal plants and trees have
been extincted
, even the farmland
also
influenced by
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land
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pollution
. To exemplify, In Japan, nuclear bomb explosion caused by America had caused extinction of
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many
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animal
species and loss of biodiversity, instill
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today
in the
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area
of nuclear bomb explosion vegetation has wiped.

To fortify
further
, loss of natural habitats of
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animal
by over exploitation of
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land
has shown significance impact on numbers of wild
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animals
. Day by day
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human
population has been increasing and due to that the cities and semi
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urban
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areas
are lacking space and that causes expansion of
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urban
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areas
by cutting the natural habitats of wild
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animals
. For illustration, in recent survey by Indian wildlife section from last 50 years due to expansion of
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urban
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areas
there is
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only
38% of wild
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areas
are
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left
in India in recent times.

The solution to this situation can
be done
by the
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government
as well
as by
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people
. Taciturn
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government
policies can
be implemented
that
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stop
over expansion of
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urban
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areas
. Second, more wildlife sanctuaries could
be found
to protect the wild
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animals
.
Thirdly
students should be aware of this scenario
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so
taken act
accordingly
to protect the mother nature.

To conclude
,
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human
affecting environment in
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many
ways
however
this can be
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diminish
by certain
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government
policies and awareness of
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people
.
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IELTS essay Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
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